In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
A lot of highly qualified graduates are jobless in many countries today. Many fields have used machines and unbalanced qualified fields of the graduates are becoming causes of this condition. Therefore, developing other fields is the main solution to this situation.
Using the machine in some fields has become a vital thing to run working. That is why there is unbalanced qualify because this job only focuses on some qualifications such as an engineer or/and exact fields. For example, based on the statistic of social science of Hasanuddin University in 2020, there was a conclusion that almost 95% of workers in some manufacturers in Southeast Sulawesi province were dominated by graduates of engineering or exact fields. However, this issue explained that more than half of the province’s income is from this sector.
Therefore, the government has to provide an alternative solution, focusing to develop other fields as the main solution to tackle this problem. Some countries have tried hiring workers for running some sectors such as agriculture, culture, and tourism. The agriculture sector has a lot of demand for cooking ingredients such as rice, onion, and corn, meanwhile culture and tourism sector are becoming a trend in this era. For instance, by the data from CNN news, developing countries such as Indonesia, Laos, and Thailand are focusing on these sectors, where these countries have successfully reduced the number of unemployment to more than 50% in 2021.
In conclusion, this paper has conveyed some factors of this issue such as the impact of machines and unbalanced qualifications in working can be overcome by trying to develop other fields. If it is possible, this issue has to be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24909747292 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8885875017 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534296028881 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3032769184 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184641423242 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814870535158 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876593194644 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13416647947 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903448573468 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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