In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment.What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment.
What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thank
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nk you for asking but is it easy to get a employment? I am not sure please help m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ease help me I wnna payment Thanksbut i isnt too long to bite me dhdjjajs dj fjsjskj...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Shjsncnekhowhdkdjdjbdbdjsndnsnsnsbsbsbsbbsbsbsbsb
...few places we can actually avoid them. shjsncnekhowhdkdjdjbdbdjsndnsnsnsbsbsbsbbsbsbsbsb
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, for example, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 120.0 315.596192385 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.02550136227 2.80592935109 215% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.783333333333 0.561755894193 139% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 506.74238477 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 79.4547747117 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0348881202665 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0137819751536 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194847545931 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0348881202665 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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