In recent years, many family traditions have changed. Today household law about eating in a common table with every member of the family is vanishing. In this essay, I will give reasons and explain an output of this trending to the community.
The main reason for the disappearing of this tradition is that people do not have enough time. This is because, nowadays, people are busier with their job and spend about half-day at a workplace. For example, in many companies, labor hours for employees varies from 8 to 12 hours. Furthermore, the Internet also found as a major effector for this alteration.Because family members spend their free time on social media, they lose most of their free hours in order to spend it on common eating.
Moreover, this change can influence to our society’s psychology. The reason for this is that without assembling of all members, family bonding can be damaged. As a result, people may lose love, comprehension, kindness to each other, while become more violent, enclosed and insensible. For instance, more and more teenagers commit suicide, because of lacking the relationship with their parents and having disagreements, which is the cause of the misunderstanding. In contrast, families which maintain distinguishing features of the culture have strong family bonding with respect for each member of the family.
To sum up, while the busy timetable and spending time on the Internet can influence to the disappearance of family tradition to have a meal together, in this turn it can lead to the destruction of family bonding and effect to the personnel development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15969581749 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99747613189 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.567705676 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279163330036 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105527501376 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813970618759 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188680379839 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582920060406 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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