At the outset of new millennium, planting trees has became the maiden requirement not only for planted in the vacant areas but also for sustainable development. It is stated that, in this days people says that trees should be plantef in vacant areas of cities and towns. while, half of number people opinion that housing facilities should be build instend. I totally disagree with the statement and my complete agreement will be articulted in upcoming paragraphs before reaching to conclusion.
It is noteworthy to mention that, planting trees is very important for human being instead of build new houses. The main factor behind this reason increase in pollution than formative years. For instance: US government illurates a data that 60 per cent flora species are extincted from environment because of increase in construction of new roads, buildings, colonies and so on.This rise 80 percent more disease from past years like heart problems, asthma. Hence, it is enough to prove that why flora is important.
In addition to this, the other reason beyond this is that being deprived from basic facilities that is plants are only sustainble development in this earth. Because 100 per cent purification of co2 gas is done by flora and it provides us oxygen also. For example: In India majar health disease medicines are made with the help of herbs only bhut, from mid 20 century with the moderanization this all herbs are extincted from environment.Therefore, it can be said that, plantion of trees is much more important than housing facilities.
To sum up, often the analization of total agreements from my mind, enviromental problems are increasing day by day. However these prevalling circumstance can be solved if people plant more trees in vacnat areas of cities and town in oder to save surrodings as well as own life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05298013245 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86545355688 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3246784107 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357673041324 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12341941127 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115871748984 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212343732022 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12542637424 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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