In many countries very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV What do you think are the causes of this What solutions can you suggest Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Y

There is an increasing concern in many country that newspapers are not read and television are not being watched by many teenagers. As a result, the younger generation are outdated as they don’t follow the local, national, international events. This essay will discuss about the causes and measures that can be taken to curb it.

The major causes of the problem are that the most of electronic and printed media news are designed for an adultery audience are not presented in the format to attract the teenagers. Secondly, the language used are too difficult and content is usually quite serious. A lack of interest in reading or watching news are also caused due to the over coverage of uninterested topics such as political, crime and murder. As a result, the youngers are more fascinated to use the computers and internet for surfing and gaming rather becoming a regular news reader. Therefore, the unfashionable news format, excessive attention for adultery programs and linguistic complexities are considered crucial reasons for the low interest in traditional news.

There are some strategies can be used to encourage the younger people to read the abstract of the news. The first one to have is, to publish the news headlines in the internet websites in the format which is more appealing and fashionable for teenagers. The easiest way to publish more sports and academic related news to increase their interest and viewership so they will be motivated to read the news in electronic or printed media. Another way to confront the problem is, to involve the educational institution and students to be the part of news program design and development. The news agency should allow students to write stories, articles about the trending topics and submit them for publication. The academic institution should also introduce frequent reading sessions for younger people to discuss about the current trends, sports events or whichever topic that they are more interested on. This means, the greater number of people would regularly read news stories.

In conclusion, the lowest number of people reading newspaper and following news on television can be improved by changing the presentation format that are more appealing to them. The key is to utilize the website to attract the younger audience and their involvement in the publication will have a bigger impact on the readership.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17268041237 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76073518907 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492268041237 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9932192421 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.058823529 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8235294118 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166001204497 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605802559336 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388461176842 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110310802334 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135947450394 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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