In many developing countries, there is a problem with a declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
As the industrialization and rapid growth in construction business, water and air pollution have become the main problem in many developing countries. All natural resources are polluted and damaged by many human activities. These days, the environmental issue has become a very severe problem that need to be discussed carefully. The causes and some measures to protect water and air resources will be discussed further.
First of all, water is the main natural resource in every country. Humans are dependent on water by consuming and cleaning. Water can nourish all living creatures to survi...
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before release to natural resources
before releasing to natural resources
the state should be punished with highly fines.
the state should punish them with highly fines.
it can lead to over tons of carbon and toxic gas release to the atmosphere.
it can lead to over tons of carbon and toxic gas releasing to the atmosphere.
Developing countries should apply necessary environmental policies along with all help from citizens, it will improve the quality of air and water in a nation, eventually.
Developing countries should apply necessary environmental policies along with all help from citizens, which will improve the quality of air and water in a nation, eventually.
flaws:
Try not repeat words, phrases and sentences. like 'release'
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