Challenges are inevitable in rising countries, pollution of air and water exerted by factories and construction are the topmost contributor. This essay aims to enlist a few reasons behind this negative trend, followed by a logical solution.
Firstly, building infrastructure is a huge task which needs a lot of manpower and heavy equipment. While creating skyscrapers is a good sign of a good economy, it tends to be one of the primary contributors of water pollution. Most construction developer companies don't have proper training and procedures being followed during the work, which results disposing harmful chemicals to the canals or directly to the ocean. Secondly, factories who operates by burning or mixing different kinds of plastics pollute the air. For example, plastic action figures are required to be heated in a certain temperature for it be fully molded to the desired appearance.
Problems like this should be taken care of as soon as possible. One solution is to formulate a strict law to all construction companies to abide. A rule that all firms must pass proper waste disposal plans before initiating, will be beneficial. Moreover, it should include a massive penalty for those who don't abide by the law. Furthermore, the government should create an agency. These people are the one responsible for checking in a time-to-time basis factories who secretes waste in the air, to determine if the operation is still environmental friendly or not.
To conclude, although investment like constructing buildings and having factories is a positive sign of an evolving country. In my opinion, rules and keen observation should be followed for the country to fully develop.
- Some people think that the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 89
- Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved? 78
- An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries.What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? 77
- Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? give reasons and relevant examples. 89
- Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter -explain the reasons for the noise -apologize -describe what action you will take 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03089034713 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5109508235 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13923032333 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452909736857 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479039773257 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848227656821 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027115209217 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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