Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the recent era, a few countries' growth are improve; whereas, other countries' growth declining. In this phenomenon that government wants to rise only economic growth, while some people argue against them that is not only important, but other types of progress are similarly important. In my opinion, I believe in other types of progress are equally important for many worthwhile reasons, as described in below paragraphs.
At the onset, basically the government want to climbed only financial growth because the first reason is that it is created and increased the country's impression. Many international companies are investing their money in the country based on the economic growth of that country. If the economic growth of country increase, an international companies invest of their business in the country. For example, according to the last month news paper, the economic growth of India is increasing; therefore, a few international companies are investing their more money in India.
On the other hand, other categories of progress are likewise prominent to the nation. Health , transportation and facilities are also influential growth to the nation. If people are healthy and wealthy, country's growth increased. For instance, Narendhra Modi, who is the recent prime minister of India, is trying to improve health of Indians for the way of giving scheme like " Ayushyaman Bharat Yojana", which is providing money ( up to two lakh rupees) to the poor people for any medical treatment.
In conclusion, economic growth is improving industrialisation of country, it not mean government should increase only economic growth; however, civilisation is also similarly important for the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
In the recent era, a few countries growth are improve; whereas, other coun...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
... recent era, a few countries growth are improve; whereas, other countries growth declin...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ries growth are improve; whereas, other countries growth declining. In this phenomenon th...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es of progress are similarly important. In my opinion, I believe in other types of...
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...or example, according to the last month news paper, the economic growth of India is increa...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...likewise prominent to the nation. Health , transportation and facilities are also ...
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Suggestion:
...t Yojana', which is providing money up to two lakh rupees to the poor people...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'means'?
Suggestion: means
...ng industrialisation of country, it not mean government should increase only economi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48106060606 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99862553064 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8205650258 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0833333333 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2072258646 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857255567895 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806107871334 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136606222125 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545740268648 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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