Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some state officials believe that economic development should be prioritized, while the opponents of this idea prefer to focus on a variety of other progresses, not just only economy. From my perspective, I would argue that balanced improvements to all kinds of country’s aspects offer more advantages.
On the one hand, it is beneficial for residents to live in a nation with strong economy. Obviously, people can increase their income and improve their standard of living. For instance, in 1975, Vietnam was a very poor country affected by the war, so the economy was highly weak and people had to receive financial and food support from other nations. However, after above 40 years, today, with a lot of trade agreements signed throughout the world, citizens approach various chances to coöperate with foreign investors, and build their assets day by day. As a result, their income and living condition reach a new discovery in this country.
On the other hand, it seems to me that beside economic progress, the governments need to divide their resources on other important types such as transportation system and pollution problems. Firstly, it will much more necessary to enhance network facilities if they want to develop economy. As a matter of fact, business needs road systems such as highways, tarmac streets or railway system to deliver products, materials to serve the customers all over the nation. The financial performance of enterprises established in a country reflects its economic strength mostly. Furthermore, it is much significant for residents to dwell in a better environment without any pollution. In China, such as, economic progress leads to severe air pollution so that it influences hugely on the citizens’ health. Apparently, it is not a suitable decision for people to concentrate on only economy.
In conclusion, while economic development does have some benefits, it seems to me that the advantages of compliment aspects makes the way of living to become the better choice.
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- Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to and from school in 1990 and 2010 using various modes of transport Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rele
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25696594427 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9047805099 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616099071207 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.924885379 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176389570516 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526143158975 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048483981069 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877434509838 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043247480198 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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