Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol.
What is your opinion?
Nowadays, the habits of smoking and alcohol consumption have become more widespread among the population despite the negative impacts they have on physical and mental health. It is argued that laws proscribing the use and possession of drugs should also involve cigarettes and alcoholic beverages. I completely agree with this idea.
Firstly, smoking cigarettes can have adverse effects on the body leading to life-threatening complications. It is certain that tobacco and nicotine are the main causative factors of various cancer types including lung cancer, urinary bladder cancer and ovarian cancer. Over the past decade, cases of lung cancer have significantly increased around the world, and 9 out of 10 cases are linked to smoking. In addition, secondhand smoke exposure can occur when children or adults inhale what’s being exhaled by active smokers. Consequently, asthma attacks are exacerbated and passive smokers are usually at risk of a large number of respiratory diseases. Therefore, implementing smoking bans could be beneficial in protecting nonsmokers from the side effects of secondhand smoking, reducing the costs of medical treatments and lowering the mortality rate.
Another point to consider is that alcohol consumption and smoking can cause permanent brain damage. They are known to be addictive and have psychological side effects including, depression and anxiety. As a result, they can disrupt mental functions and lead to less productivity at the workplace or decreased academic achievements among people. Additionally, traffic crash fatalities in the United States involve a large number of drunk drivers. Furthermore, it is common nowadays for teenagers to resort to substance use as a way of rebelling and showing independence because they lack emotional strength. Hence, the prohibition of alcoholic and tobacco products can lead to the betterment of social and mental health around us and save countless lives from car accidents.
In conclusion, I believe that proscribing the production and selling of alcoholic beverages and cigarette packets would lower the number of health problems, treatment costs and car accidents related to them, and improve the physical and mental health of teenagers and adults.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 612, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... passive smokers are usually at risk of a large number of respiratory diseases. Therefore, implem...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...fatalities in the United States involve a large number of drunk drivers. Furthermore, it is commo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60588235294 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97968322322 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608823529412 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5131961249 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137794127324 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413106941523 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567854148101 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828080325338 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639589690933 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 612, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... passive smokers are usually at risk of a large number of respiratory diseases. Therefore, implem...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...fatalities in the United States involve a large number of drunk drivers. Furthermore, it is commo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60588235294 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97968322322 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608823529412 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5131961249 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137794127324 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413106941523 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567854148101 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828080325338 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639589690933 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.