The authorities consider the financial sector as a vital aim in a state’s growth. For certain public, similar concentration is believed to be given to all the sectors. Since, economy represent strength of a country. In my opinion, I believe that economic development leads to bear all the challenges.
Undoubtedly, the most prevailing reason behind the economy is to gain a stability in a country. A boost of trade, such as export and reduce import that support raising the foreign exchange reserves, which are used in investment throughout the world and incline Gross domestic product. For instance, if China has enhanced export and reduced import, that leads to store reserves of dollars, which is the only currently used for trading or investing outside the boundary. Secondly, the more reserves we make, the more shall a country able to make money, such as local currency because its limit is mainly calculated by the international currency. Consequently, the finance is the backbone of the country’s progress.
On the other hand, the other elements can contribute significantly in the country’s progress. Firstly, the sectors such as education that turns a person from normal level to an Engineer or a doctor, which may drive him towards inventions related to various fields. For example, an Information technology expert collaboration with automotive engineer may invent advanced Aircraft that might fill gaps domestically as well as international trading and may save billions of dollars. Hence, development can also be made effectively through local development.
In conclusion, while both views are an essential part to drive a state’s progress. I am convinced that the economic evolution can contribute in a more effective way and can assist the government to earn and develop the local institutions. Given this situation, it is recommended to concentrate on financial sectors preferably.
- WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades Although some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology 80
- The big salary is much more important than job satisfaction To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people believe that women should play an equal role as mean in a country s police force or military force such as the army while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic social and commercial perspectives What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures 56
- Scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people think the development have a positive impact others think it is negative To what extend do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...elieved to be given to all the sectors. Since, economy represent strength of a countr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40802675585 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09035167689 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9141434181 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0625 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6875 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144324728826 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462443394875 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509358438447 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777105496265 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249387045264 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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