Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many state leaders consider economic development to be their most crucial ambition. While there are some arguments that the evolution of other fields has the same importance as the economy, I would argue that it is better for our society to improve every type of progress.
There are several reasons why economic growth is supposed to be the most essential. Firstly, economic progress plays an important role in contributing to the living standards of citizens. For example, in Singapore, due to its low population and small territory, the residents still have a satisfied and peaceful life thanks to smart economic policies. Secondly, economic advancement has a significant impact on favorable trends in other fields. Economic performance earnings can be used to improve education, agriculture, or heritage preservation.
However, I believe all types of processes should be improved to ensure more stable growth for nations. The first reason is that economic growth can not be sustained without the assistance of other sectors. For instance, educational progress leads to economic progress. When governments place a high priority on improving the educational system, they will generate professionals who will be able to get better-paying jobs. The second advantage of strengthening the other system is that it will have a greater beneficial impact on people's safety. Improvements in national security will give people a stronger sense of security in the country they live in, allowing them to work more efficiently.
In conclusion, economic progress is a government priority because it gives them a better position in terms of worldwide rankings, I suggest the other types of progress should be viewed as equals because of its importance.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41544117647 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01007310821 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5077403388 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293656143925 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985194875944 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071415981825 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192003177445 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458329946507 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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