Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many governments belive that business development is their most significant target. But on other aspect some people advice that other progress have the similar fuction with economic for the nation. In my opion both view have their own benefit and drawback with each person or each country. The following essay will analyse these satement more clearly.
On the one hand, country which think that business progress is their most important goal will be more concentrate in this fields. The governments will pay as much as money they can for the economic development of their country following that, the human's life will be beter than before. Furthermore, with some devoloping country like Viet Nam, Cambodia and Laos need to be pay more attention on economic progress, it is the best way for improving their nation to catch up with some developed country. For instance, in the campain for building their country the fastest method is improving the economy. In the negative aspect, if the government just concentrate on the business development and leave other types of progress will make the opportunity for the crimes and bad people abuse and do the terrible things.
On the other hand, country also need to concentrate on other types of progress like security, medical and law for the governments can be control the sociaty. Moreover, other types of progress are very necessary and can not be leaved to people's life. For example, let take abour the medical which is very important, if the goverment impove the facilities, medical equipment, people's health will be better to help country more development. In addition, the government do not know what is the things their country need to impove then they will lost a lot of money, time and human's labour but they can not get any achievement.
To conclude, the government who think that economic progress is their most important goal or concentrate in other types of progress are have these advantage and drawback appropriate with each country, so the managemant should be know what is the best choice to their country development for the human's life better and better.
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...ce to their country development for the humans life better and better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01988636364 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59095737345 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463068181818 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.086567047 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.214285714 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387422542111 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145381442568 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825419974323 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265429661811 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613553544291 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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