Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although it is sometimes thought that national authorities give great significance to economic development, others are of the opine that there are other areas of development that need equal attention. In my opinion, financial strength is important, whilst the well-being of their citizens and future of their children is of greater priority.
Economic progress surely assists in the advancement of the nation on a global scale. In other words, it creates better opportunities in the international market were money stands for power. For example, if you are financially strong country, you will be desirable by other nations for business proposals. They would want to join you in governs the global networking and trading stock markets.
However, other people believe verity of different development areas must be equally priorities and I strongly agree with this. The government ought to look out for their people by providing best healthcare facilities, offering free education for children and suitable job opportunities for everyone. A nation's economy will automatically increase if its inhabitancy is highly educated with good jobs and healthy. Furthermore, citizens will not be a liability but a positively contributing member of its economic prosperity.
In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe it would be beneficial for state authorities to focus on its inhabitants that contribute towards the state’s economy than only focus on the economic development.
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- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 33
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 84
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... to economic development, others are of the opine that there are other areas of developme...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'providing the best'.
Suggestion: providing the best
...t ought to look out for their people by providing best healthcare facilities, offering free ed...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...table job opportunities for everyone. A nations economy will automatically increase if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65044247788 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11201645389 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628318584071 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9530517263 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.090909091 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164878191676 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613972832934 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345043958345 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09602431116 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388023591228 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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