Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
In recent decades, the economic progress has become the most important goal for governments all around the world, which leads to controversial debates among citizens. Although economic growth is fundamental for every nation, other aspects should be equally justifiable.
On the one hand, economy acts as an incentive for national growth. By providing residents with subsidies and social services from affluent revenues, living standard is upgraded. Otherwise, if a county is not in good economic health, citizens are more likely to suffer from recession such as famine, epidemics and unemployment. In addition, other aspects including education, science and medical services are based on the economic ground. For example, thanks to the considerable taxes collected from flourish economy, American government has studied about outer spaces to come up with new insights into alien life, which become a memorable breakthrough of human.
Nevertheless, besides economic progress, other aspects should not be overlooked for their essential impacts on society. First, government has to control crime statistic together with economic growth. For instance, that the Vietnamese government currently focuses mainly on economic growth at the expanse of education and crime controlling gives room for juvenile crimes in some latest years. Second, social healthcare is another issue that should be taken into account. In reality, although China is one of the strongest-economy countries, the neglect for medicine industry acts as a deterrent for overcoming illnesses.
In conclusion, neither economic progress nor any other one is the most fundamental aspect for national growing progress. In order to comprehensively develop a country, all of the aspects contribute to the success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74524714829 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97237737377 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.732722536 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243195407375 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806174419778 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728938820648 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163856184112 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067374590417 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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