In the modern world, more and more food and drink items containing sugar are produced. They are said to be harmful to human health. Therefore, sugary product prices are expected to rise to persuade consumers to consume less sugar. From my perspective, I believe that making sugary products more high-cost is not an appropriate solution.
Firstly, raising the cost is an unsuitable approach for some people. Sugar has become part and parcel of everyone's life. If the price is higher, people can not purchase many essential sugary foods such as bread, yogurt, and noodles, which benefit their health. As a result, they may lack the necessary nutrients to boost their energy. Moreover, it also dramatically affects a nation’s economy and lifestyle.
Moreover, if people increase the cost of sugary items, it will result in the redundancy of such products as people can not afford them. And then, the government has to work out an approach to deal with this problem. In addition, it may have riots, protests, and even robbing to get food. Like addicts, when people are addicted to those, they may go to any lengths to get it, so a high price does not curtail their abilities to buy such expensive products.
In conclusion, making sugary products more costly is not a feasible solution as it leads to a lack of essential nutrients, redundancy, and protests, affecting the nation's economy and lifestyle
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ts a nation’s economy and lifestyle. Moreover, if people increase the cost of sugary ...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...redundancy, and protests, affecting the nations economy and lifestyle
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01709401709 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64391455417 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3833332665 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8571428571 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319265823109 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946914644749 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737420256058 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180154128288 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105558469685 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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