Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Do you agree or disagree?
A large quantity of health issues are caused by the consumption of sugary foodstuffs, hence, some people believe that an increase in price will contribute to a reduction in the use of those products. However, from my perspective, this idea may cause several disadvantages to the residents in many aspects.
Food or drink containing high levels of sugar still benefits people in need to a certain extent. These groups have high demands of sugar consumption to satisfy their current demands. Therefore, approaching these kinds of products will become challenging because they have to pay a higher expense, which may result in social inequality. For instance, people suffering from hypoglycemia may use sugary products as a therapy to relieve the situation, and raising the price of those products can breed heavier expenditure burden on these people. Products consisting of sugar can also be a quick and ideal method to recharge the energy in a speedy way to certain individuals, especially those who are skinny or malnourished, which still account for a large part of population in some nations.
Implementing a price growth in the area of sugary products can engender the rise in sugar cost, which may also negatively affect people economically. Sugar is a vital substance in every dish and a climb in this sector can lead to inflation, which is considered enemy in most of the strategies of economies in the world. A case in point is that, when sugar cost increases, the expense people have to spend on meals also soars up, and this is a contributor to currency devaluation.
All in all, in spite of posing certain risks to the healthiness, I am not an advocate of the idea that people render the price of sugary products more costly due to the aforementioned reasons above.
A large quantity of health issues are caused by the consumption of sugary foodstuffs, hence, some people believe that an increase in price will contribute to a reduction in the use of those products. However, from my perspective, this idea may cause several disadvantages to the residents in many aspects. Food or drink containing high levels of sugar still benefits people in need to a certain extent. These groups have high demands of sugar consumption to satisfy their current demands. Therefore, approaching these kinds of products will become challenging because they have to pay a higher expense, which may result in social inequality. For instance, people suffering from hypoglycemia may use sugary products as a therapy to relieve the situation, and raising the price of those products can breed heavier expenditure burden on these people.
Implementing a price growth in the area of sugary products can engender the rise in sugar cost, which may also negatively affect people economically. Sugar is a vital substance in every dish and a climb in this sector can lead to inflation, which is considered enemy in most of the strategies of economies in the world. A case in point is that, when sugar cost increases, the expense people have to spend on meals also soars up, and this is a contributor to currency devaluation.
All in all, in spite of posing certain risks to the healthiness, I am not an advocate of the idea that people render the price of sugary products more costly due to the aforementioned reasons above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 632, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a speedy way" with adverb for "speedy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...and ideal method to recharge the energy in a speedy way to certain individuals, especially thos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, may, so, still, therefore, for instance, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 41.998997996 224% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2760.0 1615.20841683 171% => OK
No of words: 554.0 315.596192385 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98194945848 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87870316797 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.303249097473 0.561755894193 54% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 891.0 506.74238477 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2077592521 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.428571429 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.380952381 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291257268271 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106286709379 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053516463079 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156990324461 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571821373716 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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