Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Museums and historical sites have always been known as places to gain culture and history information of a country. It is uncommon that, however, they are only cared and visited by foreigners. Obviously, this problem is attributed to a number of reasons. However, there are also several steps people should take to improve this.
The first reason of the lack of local presence in such places is that so hectic are locals' life that they have little time left for family, their leisure hobbies and friends, let alone having interest seeing historical objects or reading theoretical knowledge in such places. In fact, people nowadays shoulder more pressures than ever, thus in leisure time, hanging out with friends and heading cinema or shopping malls are more appealing activities than going to museums where visitors barely have fun things to do. Also, during their student lifetime, locals have gained knowledge related to history, geography which is the main theme of these places. As a result, they do not have reason to explore a war museums for example, given the fact that they have already known all the results or their countries' historical fights in their high school years.
Regarding possible solution, maybe the first step is for the government to allocate more budget to promote the value of such places. They could, for instance, record sophisticated videos describing valuable and instructive artifacts display in which people could learn in a historical museum, trigger the viewers’ curiosity and interest. Furthermore, institutions and schools could join hands by organizing important events like meetings, picnics, job training days or teamwork activities in such places, making it more widely known and familiar to the public.
To recap, owing to these reasons, one can reach a conclusion that the ignorance of the locals toward museums is attributable to their hectic schedule, together with the boredom of such places. Organizations and authorities, however, could change the situation by doing various steps, making such places more visited by locals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 709, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'museum'?
Suggestion: museum
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35454545455 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61700310167 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.177366123 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.923076923 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210604717641 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737203176216 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346227020171 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131044765946 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443026452932 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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