People cart eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
It is ubiquitous nowadays that people could order and buy food from far-fetching places. this essay is to shed light on both pros and cons feature of this trend before reaching my conclusion.
On the upper side, to the eaters, sampling different kinds of food from other cultures is a solution to their monotonous daily meals. people from Western countries, for instance, could easily change from hamburger in the breakfast to Pho, which is a special food in viet nam, in the evening without feeling bored. Furthermore, they could also gain knowledge relating geography field of various regions while ordering their food. Durian or blue dragon from viet nam provide a telling example while they let the eaters know that this is a tropical country which is hot year round. To the producers and locals, they have more chances to widen their customers’ base as a product now could be transported and delivered million miles away within a few days.
Some people argue that, however, this trend could lead to a drop in local sales since users have an inclination towards international products. they may ignore the fact that, nevertheless, this imbalance could become a driving force for local brands to improve their products’ quality, not only to win national customers’ favors again, but also to make their food widely known in other countries. Opponents also believe that the prices would increase exponentially, given the fees of using long-distance vehicles like airplanes, and preservative substance may be used to keep the food fresh. this view is ungrounded, on the ground that advance technologies have made air travel much more reasonable and improved preservation methods enable fresh foods without using chemical substance.
To recap, owing to these reasons, one can reach a conclusion that eating various food enables both users and producers to reap benefits, provided that innovative technology has made such products available throughout the world at ease and safe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.275 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77640026608 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5409761474 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253608232665 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869022753072 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310984753463 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14457451624 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222501380727 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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