In many nations, people in huge cities either live alone or in small family units, instead of in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays, many people like living huge cities either live alone than live in extending family groups. Because when live alone they can do what they want without being controlled by anyone. So, I really like about that.
On the one hand, living alone it make me independently, know how to cook, and do housework. And live alone when we have free time, we can hang out with my friends overnight don’t be controlled by anyone. Besides that, it quite tired because you have to clean the house alone. I’m really lazy. But that is make me more grow-up. In addition, we can financial independence don’t rely on parents. For example, many young people do not wish to live the traditional lifestyles of their parents and grandparents. However, living alone allows them the freedom to do as they please without having to face constant judgement or criticism.
On the other hand, living far family it quite alone because we don’t have relatives to talk, share stories with them. And when we go home to late and really hungry. We just a meal from my parents. That’s cozy. But we can to face grandparents they get older so we should stay by their site to take care of them and we can hear important life lessons from grandparents who have a lot of valuable life experience . We will have less interaction and influence from grandparents. For example, when we meet difficult problem we can change directly with them it easy to talk and solve problem.
In conclusion, I believe that both of that lifestyles are good. Just depend on the way we live and treat with relatives in our family. The way we accept, tolerate and view them. So, no matter what lifestyles we have you still can live with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, really, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70134228188 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50550562094 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9432885683 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7142857143 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1904761905 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133211911927 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428583762154 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907628775372 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111334775127 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10301310069 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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