In these days, sport channels and programs on television are televised constantly in major part of the world. It is commonly believed that these kinds of television programs do not beneficial to youngster view about take part in sport. I totally disagree with the given idea and my opinion will be explained in the following paragraphs.
It is no doubt true that almost in all around the world, all sorts of sport are watched by means of television channels and the internet and this easiness really stand to a lot of young generation benefiting. Different parts of the world interest various sports. For example, even if cradle of taekwondo is far east but it gains popularity in our country by means broadcasts of Olympic games and tournaments on television and internet. For these reasons, preferring of alternative sport branches show upward trend between youth. In addition to that, people who watch sports competition recognize about importance of physical activity which can ensure starting sport. Moreover, accomplishment in international competitions encourage the citizens who live these countries and thus enables the strong social relations between young people.
There is a point I would like to raise here. Especially in some east and our country, the number of both professional and amateur female players is not enough. I think, these types of television broadcasts ensure increasing female sporters whose opportunities can not be enough. For instance,I liked to watch tennis match and wanted to play it when I was fifteen years old. But I did not chance because we had not any court for playing. After many years, the popularity of tennis increased rapidly in my country and tennis court was built in my city. By this way, I learned this sport and I have been playing match for a long time.
To sum up, I believe that sport broadcasts should be increased and a lot of channels should be established. Thus, young people can make sports to part of their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99696969697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75617846717 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2560171769 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6111111111 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250589667761 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074762671749 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715895646716 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154866291784 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422522863369 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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