It is true that consumption of surgery drinks are getting popular nowadays even in less developed countries. While a number of factors explaining these trends, many authorities have taken measures to tackle these unhealthy habits.
Heavy marketing is the root cause of increased demand for sweet drinks. Companies target kids and youngsters by creating advertisements that appealing to them. Secondly, increased demands and saturation of fast-food chains also play a crucial role in the increased consumption of soft drinks. Furthermore, in some parts of the world soft drinks are cheaper than bottled water which leads consumers to choose them over water.
World health organisation and other government agencies have concerns over these trends, as consumption of soft drinks leads to many health problems such as diabetes, kidney and heart failure. obesity amongst children is also a side effect of increased sugar intake. Governments and the public could take few measures to minimise the intake of sugar-based drinks by implementing strict laws and strategies. For example, France and New Zealand implemented sugar tax for these drinks which increase the price of the bottled soft drinks, as it becomes more expensive people will seek alternative options. On top of that, many supermarkets display drinks next to the billing counter or shelf close to the checkouts which lead the customer to grab them before leaving the store. Furthermore, removing vending machines from public places also helps. And creating awareness is the best way to tackle these trends, schools should run campaigns to create awareness for its pupil.
To encapsulate, Although the demands for unhealthy soft- drinks are increased, implementing effective steps that can help to reduce the consumption of sugary drinks is possible
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obesity
... as diabetes, kidney and heart failure. obesity amongst children is also a side effect ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as, it is true, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91698113208 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47369507783 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2196032426 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224294164637 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670581161584 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075879378358 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138283865768 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845342682659 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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