Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime. While others feel that little action can be done to stop crime. What is your view?
Crime is a grave issue across the globe a recent decade are witness of increase in crime section. Amid this there are a lot of factors consider that are related to crime. Since, a faction of people argue that they are frightened from crime they do not like to come out from there accommodation. So, they are more likely to take few vital step against crime while other think that it can be done at small rate. I will try to throw light upon cause of crime and the possible measure that should be taken. I will also try to posit my perspective about it.
To commence with there are multifarious reason to shore those people who commit crime without thinking about its result. First foremost people who stay for from education sector they feel that there is no other option without obtain the way of crime such as thief and pickpocket. Due to lack of education, they become have not a job. As a result, the unemployment rate increase so, people are diverted to unlawful activities. Secondly, the dominant reason of crime is that unsatisfied salary has been got from industries so, they embrace the illegal way to get more money like kidnapping or pickpocket. Hence, people feel of timorous due this inappropriate activities.
On the other side of spectrum, there are many solution to halt this problem. The predominant measure that is taken by government. According to government they should introduce a strict law against crime and spread awareness of those rules if anyone break the rules than they have suffered from enormous punishment. Another solution is encouraged the owner of business or industries for expanding their sector in other area with government subside which can led to increase employment and create jobs therefore, those who live under the poverty line not only they do not have to choose way of pickpocket or burglars for survivals but also stand a chance to earn enough money for completing their need of life.
Aggelomerating, all the point I elaborated an above, it can be concluded that crime has become more serious consequently people are getting afraid from illegal activities So, government need to take strict step for reducing the crime rate in nation. That is why, I support that person who are in favor of they feel daunt to go outside of home. So, it is more fruitful in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ors consider that are related to crime. Since, a faction of people argue that they ar...
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... from crime they do not like to come out from there accommodation. So, they are m...
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...while other think that it can be done at small rate. I will try to throw light up...
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...read awareness of those rules if anyone break the rules than they have suffered from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80049875312 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58660117839 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528678304239 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9714432068 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.315789474 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277572275713 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864558885516 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064612539553 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181340211395 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719684298581 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.