many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals.Do you agree or disagree? why?
since 1980s, there are numerous circus in various countries showed dolphins attractions. since dolphins were functioned as a subject for circus, most of kids and parents feel dolphins is a funniest animals that were favored by them. Therefore, there are a bunch dolphins souvenirs which purchasable within the event was sold out quickly.
However, I would like to disagree that dolphins should be a subject of circus which was maintained by some organizers. Before the show, there are a bunch of victims which executed by organizers towards dolphins, such as dolphins should stay and life in a small box which contains fossil fuel and salt water that were injured them, dolphins should were forced not to eat for a day, as well as some body part of dolphins should be cut. Absolutely, these patterns were indicated as torture towards animals.
On another hand, these patterns also gave some negative impact towards dolphin's psychology and physics, i.e, dolphins tend to be easily depressed as well as they body's should be easily sick. Hence, since 2000s the European Union (eu) has regulated that all of country's members should be banned animals attraction in their regions. Furthermore, eu viewed that animals attraction just gave more benefit for the organizer then animals which should be victimized by them.
To sum up, animal attractions which especially dolphins attractions has more negative then positive impacts. So, the necessary for banning all of animals attractions is incredibly rationale. there are numerous kinds of alternatives attractions that could be showed by circus organizers, albeit do not by animals which especially dolphins.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, as to, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30798479087 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68561676499 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551330798479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3967480456 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123019759202 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055081515168 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380899835727 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819863997799 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372716927108 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.