Many people are doing their shopping online on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.
With the development o also some drawbacks of that as well. And here are the pros and cons of doing purchase online. Firstly, about the benefits, ih the internet and then choose the one you want. It saves you tons of time and money for commuting. Secondly, during the special days like the holidays or at the end of the season, there will be huge sales so the customers can get their favourite items with a much cheaper price and most of them only available online. Furthermore, it provides you multiple payment options like cash, credit card, debit card and transfering. They have a return policy in case you did not receive the item you purchased or you were not satisfied with it so you can ask for an exchange or refund. On the other hand, it has many disavantages too. About the goods, the transporting is fast and easy if you buy it domestically. But if you buy it abroad, you will have to wait for a long time because of the tariffs and shipping over long distances. Also, sometimes you will meet the internet frauds that gives you the wrong or fake items and won’t pay you back. Then, they may sell your privacy information such as phone number, home address, etc. to other businesses for money. According to the reports, it is found that online scam cases have increased significantly in the recent years. In conclusion, purchasing online has both pros and cons, but the advantages still outweigh and can offset the cons.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59765625 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48869207755 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6328125 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2166877028 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.070293700568 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262302283279 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341928438441 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070293700568 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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