Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time. Do you agree or disagree.
In the cutting edge era, offsprings have lot of free time to perform their activities, however a host of people say that the free time should be involve in school work. I am not agree with this view point that in their free time they have to perform some other activities, which are beneficial for them I will shed light in the subsequent pargraph.
To begin with, one of the best known is to perform several outdoor activities. To clarify, in their free time if children play outdoor games it help to fresh their mind and keep their body fit whereas if they do school work it confuse their mind and make stress which is not beneficial for health. To cite an example, the well known school of delhi, DSP school do not allowed students to execute school work instead of this the school authority encourage child to play in ground. Therefore, this result, youngster easily concentrate on study and score good marks.
Moreover, the most exciting option is to attempt that children should spend time with family in their free hours. To elaborate,in the new millennium adults are not aware about family that what is going on they always busy in studies. This result they do not learn about ups and downs in life. So, in free time it is better to spend few hours with family by which children learn responsibilities and also aware about how to tackle with situation.
In conclusiom, as per my viewpoint, guardians should encourage children to devote their free time in other activities instead of study which can be helpful for brighter future prospective.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: involved
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
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... time if children play outdoor games it help to fresh their mind and keep their body...
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Message: Did you mean 'confuses'?
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...family in their free hours. To elaborate,in the new millennium adults are not aware...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73431734317 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46117439305 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542435424354 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0038015084 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.636363636 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408761939758 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146122010562 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954265086124 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241262390153 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404916515107 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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