Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?
* Nowadays, in many companies and corporations, more and more employees are working over office hours. there are several reasons for this case, and it also causes negative impacts on both society and individuals.
*Beginning with some reasons which make employees work overtime. Firstly, people want to earn a living and improve their life better by working more and pushing their productivity. corporations saw the ambition in their employees then they will incentivize laborers to work longer hours by some rewards like promotions and overtime payments. Secondly, because of the labor redundancy, many employers will hire employees as few as possible to reduce and save financial burden. this action created so much competition in working conditions, Junior workers
who always work in fear that one day their position will be replaced by their young colleague. they just work harder and harder to keep their jobs then earn money to support their private life or their family.
* Working longer becomes more popular than in the past and it has brought about many potential risks. The prominent effects are in worker’s physical and mental health tend to be worse and they had to suffer some bones problems because of constant sitting and lack of exercise. Besides, employees tend to be perpetual depressed because they must complete a large number of deadlines and required targets that cause many mental health problems and it also plays a crucial role in leading to work-related suicide cases. Furthermore, working without a schedule make people easy to ignore relationships in their private life. Such as lacking take care of their family when they work over office hours, then workers come to separate from their homes and their families.
*To sum up, working longer is popular because living quality is increasing day by day. People had to work harder to improve their life. However, this trend also has some drawbacks for individuals and the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22151898734 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57353387753 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6288118415 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221861269995 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793332003599 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388118556569 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135202545301 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539348793517 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.