Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?
With the hectic pace of life, more and more people are absorbed in tons of work to earn a living. This essay will outline some reasons behind this situation and the problems associated.
Many workforces have increased movement of spending over their working hours for some reasons. To start off, the rising costs of living such as accommodation and food are making individuals do multiple jobs and work longer hours than before in order to earn more money. As a result, it helps them to make ends meet. In addition, today there are hubs of various jobs in big cities, which promise more career choices and significantly high wages for workers. Following that, the recruiters will also require highly qualified candidates who can adapt to new workplace flexibility, which results in the other will not get a job, thereby leading to a fiercely competitive job market for the youth. Consequently, individuals have to sacrifice more time to enhance their personal improvement. For instance, sales executives often work more than standard hours to achieve the monthly targets set by their management.
An increase in the time of working perhaps makes employees take some adverse effects. Firstly, this may have a negative impact on their health. Because of spending more time keeping pace with the heavy workloads, they may not have enough time to take care of themselves, and also enjoy their life. Even worst, if they work in unfavorable conditions for a long time, they can be frustrated and disappointed in their career prospects, thus are more at risk of enduring mental health problems, such as long-lasting stress, and depression. Furthermore, working overtime makes them less enjoy great moments with their families. As a result, the family ties are not strong and close-unit as members are getting further and further apart from each other. This will affect both self-developed and the growth of society.
In conclusion, the pressure of life and the harsh job market are two main reasons to distribute an increasing trend in working overtime these days. Therefore, despite getting more wealth, people lost health and family happiness.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16045845272 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67908462682 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593123209169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6821923712 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.055555556 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174136003239 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552271631002 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517620891816 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119588726986 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644447508474 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16045845272 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67908462682 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593123209169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6821923712 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.055555556 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174136003239 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552271631002 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517620891816 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119588726986 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644447508474 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.