Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People believing that more in to inland food production and lowering food import. I find this fact may give more positive effects but there are also some negative effects.
Most of the countries; India, China and Japan have focused into inland food production at the moment. On this concept countries can experience benefits such as reducing import cost. United States spending over millions of dollars only for food import annually which is a massive cost for the country. Producing food in the country can lead to new job opportunities for those who are unemployed and this may develop the county in a great manner.
But there are some areas that we cannot take as beneficial. Some countries have different climates and some food will not be able to produce. Africa cannot grow strawberries and India cannot produce stevia due to the high heat. Some countries do not have budget on inland food production. So, these facts may affect to the negative side.
In conclusion, it is essential for a country growth to do produce food in the country. Import between different countries can create useful links and raise the growth of an economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...develop the county in a great manner. But there are some areas that we cannot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95336787565 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48801794504 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0467985543 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5384615385 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276391285102 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104340860191 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938379265713 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174183958127 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358524372457 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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