There are many reasons lead to international tourism become bad thing in native people's mind. To change negative attitudes, we have some effective solutions which will be written below.
Local people often think international tourism is not good because of two major reasons. Firstly, that many foreign tourists to visit local scenes may have an adverse impact on traditional customs and indigenous practices because tourists may be insensitive towards the feelings of local residents. Foreigner who are curious about traditional customs and they want to discover and try those customs, however they do not understand what important those activities, it lead to some local customs and indigenous are broken. Secondly, tourists often pollute or litter beautiful spots and several famous beaches. For example, there are tons of garbage and bottles in Sam Son beach after the annual summer tourist season. This is the cause of the broken landscape, therefore the native people are not satisfied with the tourists.
What the effective solutions are to solve those negative attitudes. It is vital to address the negative issues that tourist agencies should urge visitors to respect the local customs and culture of their hosts. Tour guides provide local culture information document by email to visitors before visiting the tourist site. This way will help the foreigners respect traditional customs. For instance, tour guide send documents about Yen Tu pagoda for tourists and advising them should wear polite clothes when visiting this pagoda. In addition, bodies such as the World Tourism Organisation must enforce strict regulations on the tourism industry. Strict rules such as fines when performing indiscriminate littering and dress disrespect for local customs like travelers would be fined a thousand dollars if they throw chewing gum on the road in Singapore.
In conclusions, there are some reasons lead to native people think international tourism is bad thing such as breaking local customs or littering. To deal with those negative attitudes tour guides should provide local culture information document to visitors and the World Toursim Organisations may set strict penalties when tourists violate rules of tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49709302326 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65863485741 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2229673832 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.235294118 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250908998937 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898781923397 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100479940091 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197371124511 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120400614592 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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