Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is difficult to decide that working the same job in a long term and job hopping, which leads to the best career life. In my opinion, while changing jobs bring more benefits, I believe that staying in the same job would supplies more satisfaction.
On the one hand, there are a variety of advantages why people change their job frequently. Firstly, by switching from one job to another, people have the chance to try their hands at different fields, this leads to they can acquire a wide range of skills useful in the workplace. As a result, with the knowledge which they have gained in many areas, they would easily able to promote their abilities in the new working environment and acquire a plenty of benefits in their career. Secondly, people often change their job could discover the type of job which suits them. For example, young people who adore outdoor life and they do not know which job they prefer and therefore, seek a new job would bring for them more opportunities to find out jobs which bring more satisfaction in their career later.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why staying in the same job for a long time appeals to many advantages. One of reason is people would get benefits from better job prospects, which include promotion opportunities and high salary, if they holding down the same job in a long term. That is because most companies consider both the experience and long-term commitment to promotion or pay rises for employees. Besides, there are a great of perks that follow when people work in company in many years, such as sick leave, holiday entitlement and yearly bonuses. In addition, senior employees with a wide and steady network partners as well as gain supportive long-term co-workers.
In conclusion, I believe that despite job hopping would bring many benefits, having a stable job people would gain more support for the future and career satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'supply'
Suggestion: supply
...ieve that staying in the same job would supplies more satisfaction. On the one hand, ...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'greats'?
Suggestion: greats
...ses for employees. Besides, there are a great of perks that follow when people work i...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the future and career satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85670731707 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54331709644 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52743902439 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9071952981 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200803227185 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814189441205 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575930466624 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133754338058 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492481395388 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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