Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes.
Nowadays, in many countries, a majority of inhabitants claim that foreign travelers from around the world have negative effects on their nations. Although a few causes that lead to these attitudes, there are some ways to deal with serious issues.
There are two reasons why local people presume tourism will affect their countries. One reason is that many travelers come to a nation, they can increase the pressure on the local atmosphere. The raise of using transportation, which is used to serve tourists, will emit more waste gas like carbon dioxide that leads to air pollution. Another cause is that a few people with bad behaviors which can insult some vulnerable history sites. For example, the walls of antique house Huynh Thuy Le, in Dong Thap province, have to be painted monthly because of drawings that were drawn by lacking education tourists.
However, some solutions can solve these drawbacks of tourism that affect residents. Firstly, the governments have to enact strict laws to the travel agents which have direct accountability to travelers. Therefore, tourism companies must guide and educate foreigners on how to respect the local environment. Secondly, authorities can explain some benefits that foreign travelers bring to their nations. For instance, in Vietnam, tourism accounted for 20% of Gross Domestic Production in 2015 and introduced the culture, customs, history of Vietnamese people to the world. Therefore, during this time, a majority of international events were held in Vietnam which was famous for its safety society.
In conclusion, while a number of people think that tourism activities have an impact on their countries, there are some solutions can resolve these negative feedback.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34191176471 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72324740869 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.234457974 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228357002256 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736477508661 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542896455325 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138575509031 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224011247462 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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