Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards leaving the city to settle in the countryside. Although the proponents support this trend as it benefits a healthy life, others think it would be a betterment for health advantage when living in the metropolitan areas.
There are several reasons why settlement in the rural areas would be beneficial for human health. First, living in the urban regions would be exorbitantly expensive, with the inflation in commodities and living expenditure, life of youngsters or even the old could be pressurized and stressful, which can result in depression and unbalanced lifestyle. Therefore, when people choose to move out of the city, it would mitigate life tension since the cost of living would be significantly reduced. Secondly, it is clear that the living environment in the urban regions would be unbearable in some aspects compared to rural ones. Citizens in the cities have to coexist with polluted environments, leading to air pathogens like tuberculosis or other respiratory diseases.
Another compelling reason is that the government associating with local authorities has been distributing the national budget to develop the medical facilities in the countryside. It can be seen that this is an opportunity to approach the necessary medical system nationwide. In the past, in order to conduct the operation for patients, it would be enormously difficult to carry out, making citizens hesitant to reside in the rural areas in terms of the health sector. However, even with the improvement in health facilities, the countryside can not be compared to the urban one. Residents in the cities could have access to cutting edge facilities regarding medical treatment, patients with terminal diseases can only be treated in the state of the art hospitals which are strategically located in the metropolitan regions.
In conclusion, the trend for moving out of the urbans to reside in the countryside would be advantageous for human health. Nevertheless, people need to consider meticulously all of the aspects based on their living conditions to offer the right decision for their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34411764706 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01238935388 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535294117647 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.95713452 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.785714286 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120974039901 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471053191979 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340034470393 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860755593861 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282125669432 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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