Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
It is often arguing that celebraties earn huge salary against their performance. No doubt, sucessful artists, earn hefty money. I agree they have right to earn the money against their performance.
To become sucessful artist, it is very hard work to practice to gain the skill. I trust that some having skill for singing, painting or acting, it is not only interest of respective work, it is hard work to reach that confidence to gain the talent, where they can perform their skill in from of audiences. Some times, they spend most of years of life span in practice and to get skill. Most of luck also work to take attention of the people. When your skill and recogination accepted by the public, then they get fame.
There is struggling jouney. Further Entertainers always struggle continuously to upgrade their performace so that they can win hearts of their followers. If they fail to public will erase them from the momeries. Career risk is always remail high, Hence I believe that their is no harm if they earn well to save their earning for future life. No doubt Celebraties paid paid tax to government and tax money utilised for development work.
I trust that teacher should be highly paid job. Good teachers are foundation of healthy scoiety. Teachers buid future of nation. It is much dificult works to create intectulationation in the person. I believe that it is much harder mental work. For example, Many students in the class, every student have different different capacity to understand and behavior but good teacher control and help them to make understand on respective goal.
In the conclusion, Where celebraties earns well and entertain the people. Teachers should be paid highest since only they have talent to find the forbidden skill of child, encourage them and lead to perfection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the years') or simply say ''most years''.
Suggestion: most of the years; most years
...om of audiences. Some times, they spend most of years of life span in practice and to get ski...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...they can win hearts of their followers. If they fail to public will erase them fro...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...lways remail high, Hence I believe that their is no harm if they earn well to save th...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: paid
...g for future life. No doubt Celebraties paid paid tax to government and tax money utilise...
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Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: different
...udents in the class, every student have different different capacity to understand and behavior but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, well, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9606557377 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64353805902 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8708990892 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0476190476 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5238095238 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.80952380952 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11176098396 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387400721311 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634186714532 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675704000478 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317363986324 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.