some people are in favour of, students should be wear similar clothes as uniform, while some kids and parents believe students should be free to dress the way they want as an expression of free speech. In some countries most schools have say in how students dress, for instance most of schools in in turkey force the students to wear same shape clothes as uniforms.
I believe that while there are arguments in favour of both views, students and their parents benefits more from wearing uniforms at schools.
On one side of arguments, a safe and encouraging school envirnomentis a much better place to learn than a school full of disciplines problems. In the school uniform debate, proponents believe school uniforms can helps make the school environment more student friendly. Moreover, wearing uniforms by pupils can leads to eliminate the class divide between students so in this situation school environment be more friendly.
In addition, school uniforms make it easier on families to shop for school clothes and parents don’t need to spend much time in buying clothes for their children for school.
Further more, school uniforms can enhance the sense of unity among students. In the clearer express, this style of dressing indule students to work with each other to succeed.
On the other side of arguments, we cannot deny that the personal clothes can have some advantages for pupile such as, personal clothes are more comfortable than school uniforms and wearing this clothes for long period can leads monotonous feeling among pupils.
To draw the conclusion, I would like to say that nowdays uniforms are in used in most of developed countries as unit dressing between students, because it gives them the impression that they belong to the same family and increase sense of co-opreationamong them.
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Suggestion: most of the schools; most schools
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10402684564 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59438512882 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523489932886 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5927893079 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.272727273 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221530673882 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960946006761 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758803815881 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111608956343 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599659887707 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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