Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Most people argue that scientific research should be regulated by government and not private organizations.
There is currently a contentious argument over whether scientific research should be regulated by the state rather than the private organisations.I totally agree with this opinion because this will eliminate the self-regulated biases and also allow the ownership of the research outcomes by the government.
The main reason why I believe self-regulated biases shall be eliminated if the government regulates the scientific research is that, the government has the public interest as the main agenda in research.This is because the government will ensure that the reasons for carrying out the scientific investigations is solely for the intended goal and shall put stringent measures in place to control any forms of biases and those that occur are inevitable.To illustrate this further there shall be no conflict of interest arising from the state as it is the principal controlling body for a country and therefore this means the chances of biases are further reduced.
Another reason why I support this notion that the government should be in charge of scientific investigations is that they shall be able to then own the outcomes of the research projects .when this is done, the government shall be able to implement the necessary recommendations that will follow the results of the studies and if this is done the public will benefit from the interventions. This is crucial because when the state is involved there is an assurance of sustainability of the recommended interventions.
In conclusion, I completely agree that the government should be in charge of the scientific research.In doing this,biases shall be eliminated and the state shall own all the recommendations that will come along with the findings of the studies conducted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41095890411 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20874146165 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458904109589 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.489871634 49.4020404114 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.333333333 106.682146367 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6666666667 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342930828846 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194837879623 0.084324248473 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844445862441 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224970728194 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501232415666 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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