Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Social networks like Facebook are believed to corrupt individuals in particular and communities in general. As far as I am concerned, platforms like Facebook facilitate the development of all, not worsen them as the connections and convenience brought about by social networking sites are significant and undeniable.
From a personal view, thanks to Facebook, our world has become a “flat” one where connections and interactions could be made from miles away. Therefore, businessmen can boost their sales significantly by selling their products to millions of customers online. In addition, social platforms offer us opportunities to join groups to share our opinions and experience with people with a common interest. During Covid-19 quarantines, these advantageous functions have offered employment to many people and relieved social isolation when people cannot go out.
On the social scale, Facebook along with other networking sites have promoted social justice due to the easiness and security to raise your voice. As a result, warning problems like government corruption and body shaming were heavily criticized, leading to necessary policies made by the authority. Furthermore, via social networks, local communities worldwide can now spread images and videos about their unique culture and picturesque landscapes, which in turn enhances local tourism. Consequently, it is possible for local communities to receive financial resources from tourists and improve their quality of living.
In conclusion, social networking sites have brought about noticeable benefits for individuals and communities regarding connections and financial gains. For that reason, these sites should be encouraged instead of being restricted.
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- Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today Some people think that it will improve people s lives in many ways Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- the table shows the information of total health expenditure per capita in five countries in 2019 86
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9126984127 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05300862724 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.590898525 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.166666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20645582571 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773253635171 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741043467182 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131166759543 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392052242142 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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