Some people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, an ever-increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that some social platforms such as TikTok, Facebook or Instagram affect negatively on both individuals and community. However, whether mass media really leads to adverse problems or its pros can put human in advanced society, it depends on individual's perception. From my perspective, I somewhat agree with the first view and discussed below is my interpretation of this issue.
First and foremost, people should recognize that there are many advantages of multimedia. Firstly, almost types of media connect people from every part of the world easily and quickly. It is possible to receive the news of our loved ones in real-time, even from halfway across the world. Secondly, some media platforms allow users to access documents that they may not get otherwise. For example, certain countries or some political events may not be broadcasted on the television, but the Fcaebook will still permit citizens to look for them.
On the other hand, in addition to the important benefits of this problem, mass media also causes many adverse effects. In fact, one negative aspect of the Internet today is that it is hard to distinguish which is reliable or fake. As anyone can spread any kinds of information so quickly, there is no verification of what they are acquainting with. Moreover, it is also very easy to get addicted to certain media channels like TikTok, Facebook or Instagram. Once addicted, users cannot focus on outside things and complete important tasks. Last but not least, the news we expose everyday on the Internet sometimes influences on our thought exaggerated ways. For example, it is very easy to be over-critical of obe's body when unrealistic images of supermodels flood the Internet. As a result, the comments from users might be oriented by someone to benefit from them.
In conclusion, social networking sites influences negatively on our community. Meanwhile, we should not ignore the other necessary advantages which those kinds of platforms contribute to our daily life. By doing some security methods so can we make sure that adverse impacts could be eliminated or at least go down gradually.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...uman in advanced society, it depends on individuals perception. From my perspective, I some...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ssible to receive the news of our loved ones in real-time, even from halfway across ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20224719101 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84224138114 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0419155992 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4736842105 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7368421053 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155146707939 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416757741952 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628372275889 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968339440923 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057769433148 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.