Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved ?
A lot of people find it challenging to eat nutritious meals. Busy schedules and easy access are some causes. Possible solutions such as increasing tax on unhealthy food and mandatory food breaks for workers will help to stop this trend.
Firstly, due to busy schedules, most people now spend longer hours at work, thus making it difficult to get healthy food and this has lead to an increase in non communicable diseases. Furthermore, easy accessibility of unhealthy foods has made its consumption on the high side. For example, In Lagos -one of the largest industrial cities in Africa, many people hawk carbonated drinks and junks which contain many calories, on the streets, thus making it a readily available option to satisfy their craving for food.
Some measures such as increasing tax payment on unhealthy food and mandatory food breaks are possible solutions to these problem. Increasing tax payment is an effective way of reducing consumption because this will discourage people from purchasing such foods and subsequently making healthier choices which is beneficial to them. Also, institutions and organizations should include food breaks like tea and lunch break in their routine. This is because, most people engage in unhealthy diet due to lack of breaks. If breaks are given, people can have time to go to restaurants or even eat home made meals. For example, a study conducted among health workers showed that most of them, especially doctors are at risk of developing life threatening diseases due to high consumption of unhealthy meals because of lack of breaks.
In conclusion, it is becoming challenging to sustain a balanced diet becaue of easy access and long working hours. The solutions to the problem may be to increase tax payment and also ensure food breaks in organisations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20408163265 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81492127023 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3004968458 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127145977694 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479256539595 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402729934628 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813048686547 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192346258472 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.