Some people think that development of technology helps to reduce crime, while other people think that it encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is believed by certain individuals that the advent of technology has lessened crime rate. Others however, are of the opinion that it supports it. In my opinion, technology encourages crime because it provides platforms for theft to be carried out. This essay will discuss both views and my opinion.
On the one hand, technology stimulates theft as it provides avenues by which such offences are carried out. The use of gadgets, which contains various applications has made it easy to hack into people's phones, computers and accounts. Thus, increasing crime rate. For example, there is an increase in cyber crime among youths in my country because of easy access to these gadgets. Therefore, availability of technology through mobile phones and computers have heighten fraudulent activities.
On the other hand, technology has brought crime rate to a low with the advent of inventions such as drones and car tracking system. These have drastically reduced theft by providing prompt solutions. For example, Nigeria - one of the countries in West Africa- has through the help of technology found a means of reducing the rate of kidnap by the use of drones. This innovation has helped to rescue innocent citizens who were in bondage.
In my opinion, technology has increased crime rate because it has provided sophisticated weapons which help to carry out this act. For example, there are now cars that are bullet proof and are being used by thieves for violent activities.
In conclusion, although technology encourages crime by providing sound innovations that aids theft, it has also lessened it's rate by the solutions it provides. However, I am of the opinion that it supports crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75599392606 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541818181818 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6515622306 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7647058824 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25191623921 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883722494642 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051068523046 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15559952301 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591491083845 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.