People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life, what are the problems?
Should government encourage people to move to regional towns
Individuals living in urban cities usually encounter a number of issues in their day to day activities. Some of the problems include, pollution, over crowding and traffic congestion. These, has stirred up a question among people as to whether the government should promote migration from urban cities to small towns.
Firstly, people living in the cities are faced with problems of environmental pollution due to the high number of population. This is because the higher the number the more the waste generated. The waste product from the food consumed, fumes from exhausts of vehicles all serve as pollutant, which are hazardous to the health of people. Secondly, over crowding is a major issue in urban cities. This is as a result of closely built houses, due to lack of land mass that increased population has caused. Thus, leading to poor ventilation, ease of transmission of air borne diseases. For example, studies have shown that there is an upward surge in the number of people living with tuberculosis, an air borne infection, as a result of this. Consequently, reducing the quality of life of her citizens.
In my opinion, the government should encourage citizens to migrate to smaller rowms smaller towns by providing basic amenities such as electricity, good roads, recreational facilities and functional water system. This will motivate individuals to move to regional towns. Also, industries should be encouraged to establish factories in these areas so as to provide employment. For example, Lagos, a city in South West Nigeria, is faced with the issues of urbanization and due to these, many industries have established factories in neighbouring towns. This therefore, has brought about urbanization in such places and overtime, it will reduce problems faced in the cities.
In conclusion, the problems of living in urban regions such as over crowding and environmental pollution are worthy of note. The government should therefore provide basic amenities to encourage her citizens to migrate to smaller towns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35294117647 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92480698058 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523219814241 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7331321732 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0555555556 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290883897342 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771072534144 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654548565883 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17370977536 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209454218358 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.