Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet What are the causes of this problem How could it be solved

Essay topics:

Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.
What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

being as fit as fiddle is very important for plebeians. There are many people who are facing difficulty to maintain healthy diet. Although, this essay shall shed lights on reason of the problem , some measure can be taken to solve this trouble.

To embark on, there are many reasons behind this problem. First and foremost reason is that, in this modern era' people have hectic schedule. To support this point, individuals are doing overwork to earn bread and butter , so they don not have time for cooking green vegetables and exercise. secondly, plebeians prefer to eat out in order to save themselves from hassle and also because it is either save time or cheap to eat. Finally, nowadays, people are becoming addicted to technology. Moreover, they spend too much time on their smart phones and laptop. For an example, in today's era many play people pubg game for long hours, so they are adopted sedentary lifestyle because they are not giving attention to their health.

Furthermore, solutions are not easy to solve this problem. Firstly, it is responsibility of companies that they should take care of well being of their employees and provide healthy food and gymnasium. For instance, google company provides free gymnasium to their employees and other health nutritious. it does not only save money ,but, also refrain the people from stress. secondly, fast food outlets should also sell healthy food for well being of people at cheap rates.

To conclude, while, this problem has many reasons ,but, people can do plethora of things to overcome this.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41176707528 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2473403252 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.25 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30875487367 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107347056824 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992206664289 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211711563488 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932401610248 0.056905535591 164% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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