Many people make friends through social sites and chat rooms. Others believe that it is not a good idea to make friends without meeting them face to face. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and relevant examples.
With the advancement in the communication technology, a large group of individuals prefer to make friends through social media sites. However, I strongly differ with making now friends on the internet. This essay will discuss the reasons why people would never make friends through internet.
To begin with, increasing in the number of internet crimes. Making online friends is increased the chances of a person to get trapped in the scams because the number of fake accounts. It would be very difficult for individuals to identify authenticity of accounts. Thus, many people are being a victim of honey trap. The criminal also demands the huge amount of money or misused the personal information of people. As per telecom ministry’s research on this topic, since last few years, the number of cyber-crimes has been increasing at an alarming rate.
Secondly, such a long-distance relationship would have detrimental effects on the family relationship. This is because, people who engage in such a type of relationship, they spent there most of the leisure time on mobile phone. As a result, they distracted from their families. According to research of family divorce by times of India in the year of 2016, more than one quarter of couples were believed that their family had split due to unethical friendship with unknown on the internet.
To conclude the essay, the main causes, why I vote against the making friends on social media site are the fear of to stuck in cyber-crime as well as it is also responsible for splitting families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08235294118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82898710006 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3191452317 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201051564378 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677858352475 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678014558623 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125973763141 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881126574271 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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