Many people often put their personal and private information online (credit card number, address) for banking, shopping, ....Do you think it is positive or negative development?
In the technology-driven world, not only socialising but also a variety of our daily activities such as banking, shopping and educating can do online. It has become a controversial issue when people put private information online due to using those online services. Personally, I believe that providing online personal information creates both pros and cons.
In terms of advantages, Internet provides us with modern tools that we can immensely access to and work at any time, regardless of geographic locations, which is super convenient and money saving. Instead of standing in line, waiting for a long time in a bank just to transfer money to a friend, we can easily fill in an online form and make everything in order. It is undeniable that providing online information is necessary in our life, especially in the Corona situation, which helps people still work and study without being affected by viruses.
Sadly enough, online services requiring private information also reflect an uglier side of society through the drawbacks have shown up for its users. Insecurity is top concerned when a numerous of hackers and scammers just want to cheat for money and even steal the leaked personal information for terrible purposes such as publicing pornographic, nude and prurient images. Once our personal numbers and addresses are not protected, toxic, prurient, violent and inappropriate advertisements appear causing lots of irritations.
In conclusion, putting personal and private information online exerts significant impacts on our life, creates both pros and cons but somehow the disadvantages win out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02301785245 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.2027623255 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.8 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24752778464 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945136796661 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495671003752 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147254633461 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469181692673 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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