Many people prefer natural healing process such as acupuncture and massage therapy to recover from illness.Others prefer to use pharmaceutical drugs prescribed by their doctor for their alignment.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people often argue about whether to opt natural process of healing or use pharmaceutical medicines given by their doctors to recover from illness.In my opinion, both the natural and medications provided by the doctors are equally effective in helping a patient to heal.
On the one hand, natural healing process are often more gentle interventions than a chemical based drugs because they are easier to process for human body. Since natural healing uses herbs, scents or body itself, the symptoms during recovery are less intense and there are no side effects of this type of intervention. For example; I twisted my ankle playing a soccer last month and I didnot took painkillers instead i applied ice and hot towel to decrease my pain. I believe a more natural approach was right approach for this injury. However, medical drugs can be better for other sickness and injuries.
On the other hand, pharmaceutical medicines are the right choice when a sickness is sudden and life-threatening. In many cases chemical drugs are more powerful and fast acting than natural healing process. In such cases, the obvious choice is to choose pharmacy drugs. A good example is my young sister sharia who is more allergic to bees and she had to use an epinephrine injection to save her life when she was stung on the beach last summer. Thankfully, my sister could enjoy her life better without much sacrifice.
In conclusion, both natural and pharmaceutical interventions can benefit peoples health. natural medicines are sympathetic to body while medical medicines have faster and intense action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in many cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12643678161 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7704726244 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590038314176 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8904290462 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246111970663 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791290397385 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843036534316 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158897461418 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967397320126 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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