Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree??
Many people argue that wild animals contribute nothing to the human lifestyle and they need not to be pritected as it will be a waste on national resources.I totally disagree with this statement because wildlufe plays a crucial role in ecosystem and helps in uplifting the economy of a nation.
First of all, I believe that planet Earth exists not only for the benefit and survival of human beings.The ecosystem is all about relationships between different organisms connected through food webs and food chains.Even if a single wildlife species gets extinct from the ecosystem, it may disturb the whole food chain ultimate leading to disastrous results. For example; If carnivorous get reduced everyday due to poaching and hunting can lead to increase in number of herbivores who are dependent on forest vegetation for their survival.Therefore, saving wildlife plays a grear role in ensuring a check on the ecological balance.
Secondly, wildlife also plays an important role in improving the economy of the country.Many tourists from all across the world come to visit and observe endemic and rare species through their offerings for game safaris and birding tours which directly contribute to the inflow of foreign exchange.Many other activities such as trekking, fishing, and river rafting require government permits and licenses, the cost of which goes into governments account.Singapore is one great example where government has taken few major and unconventional steps of creating and maintaining the wildlife just to promote tourism in their country.So it is our duty to protect the lives of wild animals and their habits.
To recapitulate, I reaffirm my position by stating that wild animals should be conserved because they play a very important role in balancing our ecosystem and improving economy of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34256055363 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99989024516 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 177.40755339 49.4020404114 359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 308.8 106.682146367 289% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.8 20.7667163134 278% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0776483211094 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426859620846 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406496913106 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533574526057 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386793640698 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 13.0946893788 249% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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