Many people prefer to spend money and not save it.
What are the reasons?
Is this a positive or negative development?
In today's modern society, many enjoy wasting their money instead of saving it. As far as I am concerned, this could be because of desiring luxury life and following trends.
To start with, as we are humans, most people can make mistakes by not collecting their budget, but spending it. Initially, the majority of people want to admire their current life and prefer to purchase everything they need even though it may cause problems later. Secondly, running after others becoming a tendacy that cause unhealthy competitions. For instance, people who can afford buying prominent cars may be "role models" for those who cannot. As a result, it might lead to lack of money and increase the possibility of crisis.
From my point of view, spending money has not only drawbacks, but also few benefits. Moreover, when we are disappointed or stressed, we tend to get anything that makes us blissfully happy. However, these delightful moments merely lasts little time. Unfortunately, in most cases, we start regretting it, although that made us sparkled. In addition, then it may lead some detrimental health problems such as insomnia, stress and heart beating because of worrying about future. These destructive attitudes about money and sleep deprivation can affect people and decrease productivity on their work.
In conclusion, wrong financial decisions as well as habits might influence peoples' future and lead to either debt or devastation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
...ns. For instance, people who can afford buying prominent cars may be 'role models...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in most cases, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77858012063 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701298701299 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1732770523 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6428571429 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158751491647 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470340124601 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449600319938 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882621873403 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374339981077 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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