More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, more people are willingly sharing personal information online for various everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or conducting banking transactions. In my view, this trend has a negative impact as it exposes individuals to an increased risk of criminal activities.
To begin with, when people provide their personal information on the internet, they often overlook privacy concerns. This makes them vulnerable to unauthorized access and potential misuse of their data. Cybercriminals can exploit this information for fraudulent activities, causing significant financial and emotional harm to the victims. For instance, some companies collect and analyze user data without sufficient transparency or consent, profiting from trading personal information.
Additionally, sharing private details can lead to harassment, stalking, and unwanted solicitation. This not only erodes the boundaries between public and private life but also invades individuals' personal space, leaving them feeling vulnerable. Moreover, the pressure to maintain an online presence often drives individuals, especially the youth, to compare themselves to others. Consequently, users may experience low self-esteem and mental health problems. Furthermore, excessive reliance on online interactions hampers healthy human interaction and negatively affects individuals' overall well-being.
In conclusion, while sharing personal information online may have certain advantages, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh the benefits due to the risks associated with personal information falling into the wrong hands. It is crucial for individuals to exercise caution and prioritize their privacy in an increasingly interconnected digital world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38396624473 5.12529762239 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21433148004 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.721518987342 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.161569511 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.384615385 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253062188829 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774960664983 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116695268147 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162618150361 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119294807561 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.72 12.4159519038 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.59 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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