More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days, a growing number of individuals are willingly disclosing their personal information online for various purposes such as socializing on social networks or conducting banking transactions. In my view, I consider this development to be negative overall, as it exposes people to potential criminal activities.
Firstly, when individuals share their personal information on the internet, they often overlook the implications for their privacy. By revealing details like addresses, phone numbers, and other sensitive data, people become vulnerable to unauthorized access and potential misuse of their information. Cybercriminals can exploit this data for fraudulent activities, resulting in severe financial and emotional distress for the victims. For instance, certain companies collect and analyze user data without proper transparency or consent, profiting from trading personal information.
Furthermore, sharing private details online can lead to harassment, stalking, and unwanted solicitation. This not only blurs the line between public and private life but also invades individuals' personal space, leaving them feeling exposed and vulnerable. Moreover, the pressure to maintain an online presence often drives individuals, particularly the younger generation, to compare themselves with others, which can negatively impact their self-esteem and mental well-being. Ultimately, these dynamics hinder healthy human interaction and have detrimental effects on individuals' overall health.
In conclusion, while sharing personal information online may have certain advantages, the disadvantages outweigh the benefits due to the risks associated with exposing one's private information to the wrong hands. It is crucial for individuals to exercise caution and prioritize their privacy, considering the potentially harmful consequences of oversharing personal data on the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35271317829 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14803376404 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8226794547 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.583333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255353560457 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873045439937 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098638390371 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170856699123 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123343527067 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.32 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.55 12.4159519038 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.59 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.