More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
The increasing trend of individuals sharing their personal information online, such as addresses and telephone numbers, for various everyday activities raises concerns about the potential consequences. In my opinion, this development has a predominantly negative impact.
One of the main drawbacks of posting personal information online is the compromised privacy it entails. By willingly disclosing sensitive details, individuals expose themselves to the risk of cybercrime. This could lead to identity theft, unauthorized access to personal data, and fraudulent activities, resulting in significant financial and emotional distress. Moreover, divulging private details can make individuals more susceptible to unwanted stalking and solicitation, blurring the line between public and private life. This erosion of personal boundaries can cause feelings of vulnerability and anxiety, impairing healthy human interactions and affecting overall well-being.
Furthermore, sharing personal information on social networks exposes users to the practice of data mining. Companies actively collect and analyze user data to create targeted advertisements and profit from the sale of personal information, often without full transparency or consent. This not only leads to economic losses but also increases the likelihood of falling prey to deceptive advertising or fraudulent calls. Such manipulative tactics undermine individuals' autonomy and self-determination, making it easier for them to make impulsive purchases of unnecessary products.
To conclude, it is advisable for people to exercise caution when sharing personal information on social networks. The potential harm that can arise, both mentally and physically, should be taken into consideration. Protecting one's privacy and maintaining control over personal data are essential to safeguarding individual well-being in the digital age.
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- Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30384615385 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30368943839 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696153846154 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.531029842 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226345979878 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706512147957 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764230011348 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139644276081 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682271121457 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.26 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.63 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.